For writing we are doing persuasive writing. Our task was to make an ad about any product we would like to sell. Me and my best friend Darvaye made ours about the new I phone 8. Here is our presentation.
Kia ora TeAroha, This is a great persuasive advertisement as it has cool features in the new I phone 8. The feature that says it doesn't need WiFi is the best. Do you know anything about the Iphone 9? Will it be a 16 inch screen?
Hi TeAroha, My name is Irene and I'm from St Patrick's School. I like your presentation, Your words fit in well with what your trying to say. In the future maybe I'll buy the I phone 8. Great work and keep up the great effort in your writing. :)
Hello TeAroha I love your new I phone 8 advertisement, I just wanna know how big is the Iphone 8, be more specific when you say that the Iphone is bigger and better but everything besides that your work is amazing
Hello TeAroha This is a great advertisement how you explained the goods about this phone. Imagine having a phone like that, with all the best features. Keep up the great work.
Kia ora TeAroha,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great persuasive advertisement as it has cool features in the new I phone 8. The feature that says it doesn't need WiFi is the best. Do you know anything about the Iphone 9? Will it be a 16 inch screen?
Hi TeAroha,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Irene and I'm from St Patrick's School. I like your presentation, Your words fit in well with what your trying to say. In the future maybe I'll buy the I phone 8. Great work and keep up the great effort in your writing. :)
Hello TeAroha
ReplyDeleteI love your new I phone 8 advertisement,
I just wanna know how big is the Iphone 8, be more specific when you say that the Iphone is bigger and better but everything besides that your work is amazing
Hello TeAroha
ReplyDeleteThis is a great advertisement how you explained the goods about this phone. Imagine having a phone like that, with all the best features.
Keep up the great work.