Friday, March 16, 2018

Metaphore poem

For reading my group & I were learning about metaphors. Our task was to write metaphors about our family. I found this quiet easy and fun. This is my poem :)


5 comments:

  1. Hi TeAroha thank you for commenting on my blog I really like how creative your poem is It is great I thought it was awesome keep up the good work!

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  2. Kia Ora TeAroha, it's Pyper here from St Patricks School in Greymouth. I really like the way you made the font easy to read, added lots of colour and make it look good too. But maybe next time in your blurb you could say what a metaphor is.

    Blog ya later!!!

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  4. Hi te aroha Carney here.I absolutely loved your Metaphor poem and loved the words you used to describe your family members and also your family.You done an amazing job at completing this blog post and i enjoyed reading it.i loved the last one you wrote about what your family and hope to see more amazing pieces of words like this.Keep up the great work and feel free to come and check out my blog at
    http://kpscarneyk.blogspot.co

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  5. hi my name is Syrhys I am from St Patrick's in Greymouth. I really like the way you set it out and I think that it looks amazing and maybe next time you could add a bit more but it looks great.

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