Thursday, March 29, 2018

Sports poem

For writing we could do any style of writing about sports or the awa. I chose to do a rhyming poem about netball. Here is my presentation.

7 comments:

  1. Hi TeAroha I like the poem that you made the, topic was great but maybe next time you could trie to make the poem flow a little bit better

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  2. Hi TeAroha I like the poem that you made the, topic was great but maybe next time you could trie to make the poem flow a little bit better

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  3. Kia ora Te aroha Carney here.
    I enjoyed reading your sports poem and loved the excellent words you used to describe what it’s like.I also love how great you rhymed your words in your poem and really love how this blogpost came out. I enjoyed reading it and really think you presented it well and i hope to see more amazing pieces of work like this on your blog keep up the great work and feel free to come and check out my blog at
    http://kpscarneyk.blogspot.co.nz/

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  4. Kia Ora Te Aroha my name is Bella, I am a year 6 from Paihia School. I really like your blog post about netball. I play netball at my school. Out team is called The Paihia Panthers. My favourite part from your poem is when you said ‘Guarding the goal like a bird on her nest, hit the ball away and try my best. Keep up the good work!

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  5. Kia ora Te Aroha, my name is Alexandria (AJ), I am a year 6 from Paihia school. I really like your netball poem, I really like it because i play netball here at school. My favourite part was when you said we score the goal again and again we won the game at the end. It really tells how the netball games go, I think you did great.
    Alexandria (AJ)

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  6. i think that poem is amazing and its funny cuse I wanted to play netball but I gave up

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  7. Hi my name is Syrhys Bell from st pat's and I think that you might need to make the flow a bit better and that's about it and I love looking at your blog hope you upload more soon bye.

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